Monday, 22 October 2012

Fraud


I don't like lie.
I hate like.

Julie's article's fraud is sooooooooo bad!
Fraud is bad but this case is the worst type of fraud.

He pretended to have cancer.
There are many people who don't want to have cancer so he told bad lie.


And my sister was committed a fraud when she had cosmetic surgery.

She went to the cosmetic surgery hospital for her face. She wanted to change her eyes bigger.
This surgery is not difficult so it's not to be any ploblem.
Also, her doctor said "She thought his story was fishy so she believed he was honesty.
Then, she decided to leave the doctor to do her cosmetic surgery.
Finally, the surgery was successful so she was pleased but after a few days, her eyes swelled.
It was false what he said.


There are many frauds around us.
Be careful!

5 comments:

  1. i think he should not be forgiven because what he did insulted other patients.

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  2. Here are some suggestions:

    I hate like (LIES)

    My sister HAD a fraud COMMITTED AGAINST HER - otherwise you are saying that your sister was the one who did the act of fraud

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  3. I also hate people who tell a lie. Nowaday, there are a lot of people who tell a lie so be careful! I don't believe people easily.

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  4. There are a lot of lie so we have to be careful.

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  5. You completed 3/10 blog posts and made 3/20 comments.

    Your final blog mark is 6/30 = 20%

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